Post 1: grammar errors
Post 2: add new source, strengthen argument
Posts 3 and 4: edited for grammar errors
Post 5: strengthened descriptions of advertisements (as word count would allow)
Post 6: grammar errors and added a few details
Post 7: strengthened descriptions of advertisements and the slogan
Post 8: defined creative revolution for clarity
Intro: strengthened argument and pulled it throughout intro, grammar errors
Post 2: add new source, strengthen argument
Posts 3 and 4: edited for grammar errors
Post 5: strengthened descriptions of advertisements (as word count would allow)
Post 6: grammar errors and added a few details
Post 7: strengthened descriptions of advertisements and the slogan
Post 8: defined creative revolution for clarity
Intro: strengthened argument and pulled it throughout intro, grammar errors